Almost great! Only two things: the electronic violins are too difficult to make'em to sound as well as real violins, so i recommend you don't to use'em a lot, not even in a melody, i know because i had to use them... so you may better use... windwood sections? kinda. the other thing is... better don't say how much time you spent doing a song, i would seem you didn't made effort.
Great concept and song btw ^^.